Mr Twit is a fat man. He is a very very rude person. He was absolutely grubby. Mr Twit was such a old hag. He's horrible and sneaky .He is a evil man. He's cruel,disgusting,chubby,hairy and has a yucky
beard. Mr twit has bad breath. He is a TWIT.
Romy
cool description Romy. I think he is a twit too. anouska.
ReplyDeleteHi Romy,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your description of Mr Twit. It was full of great adjectives and I like how you used commas to separate your ideas.
Well done!
I loved your story because you used great descriptive words, it made it really interesting.
ReplyDeleteHannah