How to eat a lolly... By James, Eli, Aiden and Harry
WALT write and follow a set of instructions!
Here are the boys, instructing us on how to eat a lolly. How do you think they did? Were their instructions clear? Is there anything they could do better next time? Which part was your favourite?
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So you choose a topic I love, eating! well done on the instructions and will let you know if I have the same results. Otalani
ReplyDeleteHi James, Eli, Aiden and Harry
ReplyDeleteMy favorite part was when James said "... make sure the lolly doesn't fall out" and OUT it tumbles(cue instant replay) giggle giggle, very comical. I also like how you said/wrote "STUFF it in your mouth" instead of "PUT", "stuff" sounds more exciting. Well done boys.
Hi James, Eli, Aiden and Harry,
ReplyDeleteWe liked watching your video about eating lollies. We really enjoyed the instant replay! Next time you could look at the camera more as we want to see your wonderful faces!
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