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Friday, August 24, 2012
Golden Glory
Sparkling light in the night
Twinkly wishes I'll bring to you.
Pointed above the sky so high
Brings happiness to you.
Thank you for sharing your poem. The poetic lines (the sentences) are long which sound like a breathy sigh when you say the poem out loud. Together with the "sh" sound in "wishes" and the words "up high" make me feel like i'm drifting softly through the night sky. Thanks so much.
Sparkling light in the night
Kia ora Molly,
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your poem. The poetic lines (the sentences) are long which sound like a breathy sigh when you say the poem out loud. Together with the "sh" sound in "wishes" and the words "up high" make me feel like i'm drifting softly through the night sky. Thanks so much.
Thank you Molly I enjoyed your poem.
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