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Thursday, August 23, 2012
My Star.
I float all night waiting for a sound. I am always floating. Sometimes I even come shooting from outer space.
Kids love me as I twinkle. Oh how I twinkle. By Ella
Talofa Ella , I like the way you have become the star. My star would go like this.....Many am I. Love the brightness I provide. I move freely in the air without a care. Tofa for now.
Go Otalani and well done Ella for inspiring such poetic skill. Ella, I like your analogy of the star floating. Good use of metaphoric language. That means you are a star!!!
I love the word "floating" to describe your star Ella. It has an ethereal quality and makes me think of silvery ghosts or dancing ballerinas. Beautiful.
Talofa Ella , I like the way you have become the star. My star would go like this.....Many am I. Love the brightness I provide. I move freely in the air without a care. Tofa for now.
ReplyDeleteGo Otalani and well done Ella for inspiring such poetic skill. Ella, I like your analogy of the star floating. Good use of metaphoric language. That means you are a star!!!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful use of language ellah, well done x mum :0)
ReplyDeleteI love the word "floating" to describe your star Ella. It has an ethereal quality and makes me think of silvery ghosts or dancing ballerinas. Beautiful.
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