Wednesday, June 22, 2016

The chase from Darth Vader by Zoe

Long,long ago in a galaxy far,far away Darth Vader was up to no good.

On the land of Leamana three children were playing in the beautiful beach of Bozzar. Unfortunately that was right under death star.

''We need more power''shouted Darth Vader to one of the storm trooper captain.''But where are we going to find more power and what power do you want?''asked the storm trooper captain. ''I WANT THE FORCE'' shouted Darth Vader really, really loudly.''But where are we going to find that?'' the captain asked again. Darth Vader had a think and then spoke. ''There are three children down on plant Leamana. They will have to do.We'll turn them into Stormtroopers.''

 So Darth Vader headed out to find the  three children.

''Do you hear that'' asked Rose to Kate and Charlie. ''Hear what'' asked Charlie ''Hear that'' said Kate as she pointed her finger into the air.''Is that the death Star? '' asked Rose in shock, as well as shivering.'' I think that is!'' replied Kate shivering as much as Rose.''What do you think they want from us?'' asked Charlie ''And why us?'' ''Well probably because we are the only ones on this island'' replied Rose with a dark voice.

''Get them!'' Darth Vader ordered ''Exterminate, exterminate'' went his robots ''We better run,'' shouted Rose 

''Aaaaaaaaaaaaaah'' shouted all the girls loudly ''Where should we go?''asked Charlie '' We'll go to hut number 1'' said Kate '' And we'll pick up princess Lila on the way" 

So they set off to find hut number 1...

Stay tuned for Chapter 2.




4 comments:

  1. Talofa Zoe
    Love Star Wars and you introduction made me laugh out LOUD!!....what else would Darth Vader be up to other than NO GOOD. Good sentences starters and you paragraphing has improved, well done.
    Keep the .......good work am looking forward to reading Chp 2

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  2. When are you going to make chapter 2, when you do please inform me. From Pace.

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  3. Great story Zoe i really like it.From Charlie

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  4. Great story Zoe i really like it.From Charlie

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